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i got over my own fear. acrophobia.

shooting with anna. LOVE! :heart:

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:iconallen5924:
Great location to shoot fashion!

If there was a rating for location chosen, it'd definitely be 5+.

However there's a few factors that you can watch out for when doing the next shoot here (especially here on top with the railings).

The railing are placed perfectly! as it adds loads of perspective to your image, as well as the crossing pipes underneath, the complimentary colours work really well in this instance.

It seems like you used natural light only, I would definitely find a way to create a "rim-light" effect behind the model, especially in the dark shadow areas, to preven her from blending in too much.

If this image was Slightly lower, it would make it mediocre, but if it was just a tad bit higher (live view?) it would make it even better!

Something to keep in mind when doing shots like these at industrial areas: SAFETY FIRST


Great shot!

Regards,
A.
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Wow I'm absolutely in love with this photograph, from the way you have positioned the female subject capturing her hair in motion with her showing a 'trapped' type of emotion to the excellent choice of post processing colors to really make that emotive feel strive that much more further.

Along with that classy urban landscape within the background to flip the emotive feel from the left hand to to a surreal environment to the right, All in all truly breathtaking piece of emotive photography with many twists and turns oh and that bent rail is just a great choice of location.
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:iconbostonjon86:
Captivating...nice sharp image...nice location...nice model and a slightly de-saturated look with rugged colors. O and that wind blowing through her hair...another fine piece of work...

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You could have chosen a more friendly place to overcome your acrophobia!

The industrial scene and textures are very atmospheric, as is the girls pose.

Very well done!

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awsome! I love to do industrial photography. Im guessing this plant was closed? Do u mind me asking where is this?

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Hattingen Henrichshütte, Germany :D

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Absolutly phenominal picture, from the country that stole my heart. I was able to stop over in Germany for 4 days last time i was in europe. Ill be in europe again about this time next year and i hope to make it there to shoot this time. Great shot, Great gallery! keep up the good work.

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If you're interested, we'd love to feature this and any other phobia-related works in our gallery.
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This is beautiful! and not to mention, artistic too!

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Where is that place? This shot is really nice!

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old industrial museum in germany :)

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Thank you it's really wonderful, is that the museum of Zeche Zollverein?

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Feb 26, 2009, 12:24:26 PM

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