I try to avoid giving perfect scores on deviants but I couldn't help it one this one.
I love the thoughtful, innocent expression on your model's face. When I watch the animation I feel Lotte is urging someone not to hurt her. The animation isn't gratuitous, the blinking emphasizes the emotion to me.
I've always been partial to tightly cropped portraits with the model sitting on one side of a long frame. Maybe a personal preference here but I think it adds to the previous stated feeling of vulnerability.
The dark, cool colors contrast really well against the model's light skin and white clothing. The colors are a final emphasis in my mind.
No real negative that I can tell, beautiful model, dynamic expression and real motion. The idea of using animation as a very short narrative intrigues me and I think you've used the medium well.
This like, Ah, lol have no words, I saw it, it took me like one or two times watching it small (Thumbnail version) to become intrigued, Then I became captivated and HAD To click on it. Now I totally love it. I love how completely SIMPLE it is, but it's SO not! x] I love all the shiny things in the background, and all the different colors of the peoples shirts and stuff too~ I really love this. ^^ Loovely job. ♥
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A mighty pain to love it is, And 'tis a pain that pain to miss; But of all pains, the greatest pain It is to love, but love in vain -- When I think about you, flowers grow out of my grave.
I love the thoughtful, innocent expression on your model's face. When I watch the animation I feel Lotte is urging someone not to hurt her. The animation isn't gratuitous, the blinking emphasizes the emotion to me.
I've always been partial to tightly cropped portraits with the model sitting on one side of a long frame. Maybe a personal preference here but I think it adds to the previous stated feeling of vulnerability.
The dark, cool colors contrast really well against the model's light skin and white clothing. The colors are a final emphasis in my mind.
No real negative that I can tell, beautiful model, dynamic expression and real motion. The idea of using animation as a very short narrative intrigues me and I think you've used the medium well.
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