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-- ...on ne voit bien qu'avec le coeur. L'essentiel est invisible pour les yeux... Portrait Club. wow, i like how well her reflection shows in the street! you won't get a reflection like that in the streets of my country
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March 12
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Canon EOS 350D DIGITAL 1/30 second F/5.6 30 mm 200 Mar 12, 2009, 4:32:35 PM Share
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The title talks about giving up, the colors provide me a feeling of hope... However, the face of the model and the wet scene here develop the concept by resembling tiredness, loss... That is good.
To critize in the technical aspects, is the framing. We can guess the three areas but since one of them is not complete, it bothers the view.
I assume the image needs both sides of the road to be similarly shown here. Center (the model) seems to be moved (more air in the left), so we get the right side of the photo is smaller, leaving a sensation of imbalance.
Cars also bother me, but since it's not a prepared scenario, that's not something we can control.
But, as I've said, the essence is good. That means I like the overall and the vision.
Keep on the good work!
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