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Model: Johanna B.
Photo&Edit: Sabrina Cichy
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We've been to the top, we've been to the bottom
We've known everything and forgotten
You've kicked me around, you've wrapped me in cotton
You've carried our load and you've shot them
Oh yes the butterflies are still there
butterflies: *Shoofly-Stock
Photo&Edit: Sabrina Cichy
more on my blog: [link]
fan on FB!: [link]
ask on formspring: [link]
We've been to the top, we've been to the bottom
We've known everything and forgotten
You've kicked me around, you've wrapped me in cotton
You've carried our load and you've shot them
Oh yes the butterflies are still there
butterflies: *Shoofly-Stock
Image size
900x600px 410.08 KB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 40D
Shutter Speed
1/395 second
Aperture
F/1.6
Focal Length
50 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
Mar 30, 2011, 6:17:28 PM
Sensor Size
5mm
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Overall
Vision Originality
Technique ImpactI'd firstly like to start off by saying this is the first critique I've ever done.
I really like this piece, it's warm and feminine. You've chosen the perfect model and have used her well. She strikes an elegant pose that automatically made me wonder what she was looking at.
However, she also looks to be struggling with that particular pose. It doesn't look very natural because she seems to be straining her neck.
The colour scheme, though feminine, also seems to be blending in with the model, in some ways hiding her. Maybe it needs to be tweeked.
I really hope that this helps, I'm just an amateur after all.