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just felt like submitting this. i was inspired by the song "we cry" by the script. the model is a friend that i lost. few months ago. ive already submitted this.

its just another way... humm... dunno.
give your opinion
xoxo, bine

The comes a time that every bird has to fly
At some point every rose has to die
It's hard to let your children go, leave home, where they go, who knows?
Gettin' drunk, gettin' stoned all alone
Teach a man to fish, feed a man for life
Show your kids the truth, and hope they never lie
Instead of reading in a letter that they've gone to something better
Bet your sorry now, I wont be coming home tonight

I'm sick of looking for those heroes in the sky
To teach us how to fly
Together we cry, we cry, we cry

Critiques


:iconchelano:
This is a pretty nice piece you have here. The emotion is exploding in it. You can really feel it. Using a sad emotion combined with the water and the color tones, you can really tell what you are going for.

I really wasn't that fond of the reflection from the camera. It was bugging me and it is noticeable. But not enough to effect the piece at all.

The text is a nice touch, I just wish it was placed somewhere different. It isn't bad though. I think it is all personal taste where you want it to go.

I like how the photo is more in height than width. This lets the viewer see a little more of the background. You also feel more squished and uncomfortable which really helps with the picture.

So overall, very nice work. I love true photos of emotion.
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:icongrethchen:
beautiful^^
:"(

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I saw such nonsense as compared to which this nonsense is an explanatory dictionary!(c)
:iconbostonjon86:
really beautiful...nice work

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"It's not until you've lost everything that you're free to do anything"
:iconjillebeancolbert:
i love the tone and the colors

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I feel like and inside out peach in a microwave....
(in other words, warm and fuzzy inside)
:iconclockworkdesigns:
A very powerful image, I love it!~

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www.thinkvividly.com
:iconluccash:
:)

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Poslys, svet je krasny, ze?
:iconstevtomato:
You've always got this really nice colours on your photos!

A friend that you lost? :(

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All music emerges from silence, to which it must sooner or later return.
:iconsuicide-bee:
she was my best friend. she did alot of bad things to me and i decided to "break up" with her.

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pictures of you.
:iconstevtomato:
Aw :( Sorry to hear that. "Breaking up" with friends can be harder and more painful than breaking up with a partner :(

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All music emerges from silence, to which it must sooner or later return.
:iconsuicide-bee:
i know. hard to master but not impossible :)

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pictures of you.

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Canon EOS 350D DIGITAL
1/25 second
F/10.0
37 mm
800
Aug 6, 2007, 7:17:37 PM

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