just felt like submitting this. i was inspired by the song "we cry" by the script. the model is a friend that i lost. few months ago. ive already submitted this.
its just another way... humm... dunno. give your opinion xoxo, bine
The comes a time that every bird has to fly At some point every rose has to die It's hard to let your children go, leave home, where they go, who knows? Gettin' drunk, gettin' stoned all alone Teach a man to fish, feed a man for life Show your kids the truth, and hope they never lie Instead of reading in a letter that they've gone to something better Bet your sorry now, I wont be coming home tonight
I'm sick of looking for those heroes in the sky To teach us how to fly Together we cry, we cry, we cry
This is a pretty nice piece you have here. The emotion is exploding in it. You can really feel it. Using a sad emotion combined with the water and the color tones, you can really tell what you are going for.
I really wasn't that fond of the reflection from the camera. It was bugging me and it is noticeable. But not enough to effect the piece at all.
The text is a nice touch, I just wish it was placed somewhere different. It isn't bad though. I think it is all personal taste where you want it to go.
I like how the photo is more in height than width. This lets the viewer see a little more of the background. You also feel more squished and uncomfortable which really helps with the picture.
So overall, very nice work. I love true photos of emotion.
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I really wasn't that fond of the reflection from the camera. It was bugging me and it is noticeable. But not enough to effect the piece at all.
The text is a nice touch, I just wish it was placed somewhere different. It isn't bad though. I think it is all personal taste where you want it to go.
I like how the photo is more in height than width. This lets the viewer see a little more of the background. You also feel more squished and uncomfortable which really helps with the picture.
So overall, very nice work. I love true photos of emotion.
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